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   제 목   kate    상 태  
   작성자   rotto11    등록일   2010-04-14
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Today it very cold day because it snow. I was very cold so I wear a coat. But its still cold. I want to go home

-> Today, was a  very cold day because it's snowy. I was very cold so I wore a coat. But it's still cold. I want to go home

 

 

by my father's car but I can't because he is going out work. I don't like cold weather. I like summer But not

-> by my father's car but I can't because he is going out for work. I don't like cold weather. I like summer but not

 

 

relly hot weather.

->really hot weather

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