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   작성자   leedo1984    등록일   2010-05-13
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describe your school for me in as much detail as possible

-> Describe your school in as much detail as possible.


--> My school is SNUT where in Nowongu.

-> My school is SNUT in Nowongu.



It's really big. Sometimes i can't find some buildings, even though I'm last year at school.

-> It's really big. Sometimes I can't see other buildings, and this is my last  year in this school.



My school has a lot of buildings which are really high and big like a skyscraper.

-> My school has a lot of tall and big buildings like skyscraper.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

And school land is flat not hill. So i can move easily.

-> And our school land is flat, So I can move easily.



There is playground where I can play soccer or basketball.

-> There's a playground where I can play soccer or basketball.



It's also really big. So many people use school's playground.

-> It's also really big. So many people use our school's playground.



If you can walk my school, you can also see a lot of trees.

-> If you can walk around my school, you can also see a lot of trees.

And school has a pond. It's not big but I think it's awsome.

-> And our shool has a pond too. It's not big but I think it's awsome.



Because you can see fountain. It makes you felling good.

-> You can also se fountain. It makes you feel good.

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