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I had wonderful day with my family on 5th May(Children's Day on Korea). We went around Yeosu on Jerlado by KTX. Yeosu have some beautifu places, exams (examples) are Haangilam(Temple), Dolsan-Park and Odongdo-island. Haangilam is a temple builded (built) on hill around (the) beach. We could see the beautiful ocean view but Climing (climbing) the hill is very hard. Dolsan-Park has the Ocean view cable car. We could see the beautiful sunset in the cable car. But my daughter was angry because we choose (chose) a general cable car. The Cable Car has two models, one is a general model, the other is a crystal model. The crystal model's floor is made by (of) glass. So passengers can see (the view) under (or below). My wife and me choose (chose) the general cable car because of time issue ( you can also use :factor/element). Many people wanted a crystal cable car so waiting time is long.
Hi Charles,
Thank you for doing a great effort of writing a composition on the webpage. This is another useful venue you can practice your English skills. Writing is another side of English communication. Your skill in writing is very good. More writing means increase in your English skills. Therefore, keep writing and speaking in the class.
CONGRATULATIONS, good job! |
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