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1. i thought about "why" in the topic sentence.
-> I thought about " why" in the topic sentence.
And I guess author wants to explain and solve this problem.
-> And I guess the author wants to explain and solve this problem.
because it's too important to save our life.
-> Because it's too important to save our life
so author may inform & analyze for saving people from fires.
-> So the author may inform & analyze for saving people from fires.
2. americans' careless attitude makes fire hazards
-> Americans careless attitude makes fire hazards
3. adults of the worst fire death rates in the united states ( i think it's not clause, maybe phrase. i don't know exactly.)
-.> Adults of the worst fire death rates in the United States ( I think it's not clause , maybe phrase. I don't know excatly.)
4. i read about other contries story of fires.
-> I read about other countries story of fires.
it seems to be contrast & comparison, but I think it's just examples.
-> It seems to be contrast & comparison, but I think it's just examples
the author mentioned to us about other country 's story not compare.
-> The author mentioned to us about other country's story it should not be compared.
maybe the author wants us to know other country's situation & realize their situation also.
-> Maybe the author wants us to know other country's situation & realize their situation also.
5. it's the most problem in america. and the author also wants america to change their mind.
-> It's the most common problem in America. And the author also wants America to change their mind.
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